Editorial Website Review of Mitchell Law Offices

On July 12, 2020, we conducted an editorial review of the website of Mitchell Law Offices, a New York corporate law firm. For this purpose, we selected 6 web pages, corresponding to a sample of approximately 3,500 words. Our findings and recommendations were as follows:

Quality parameter Explanation Proposed edits
Mechanics, grammar For example, a phrase, sentence or paragraph may need revision so that it becomes grammatically correct. 1
Mechanics, punctuation For example, punctuation within a sentence or between two sentences may need to change to ensure correctness and improved readability. 2
Mechanics, spelling For example, a word or phrase may require revision to ensure proper and consistent spelling. 4+
Navigation For example, a hyperlink may need to be updated or removed to ensure that all links work properly.
Readability, clarity For example, a sentence or paragraph may need clarification to avoid uncertainty about its meaning. 4
Readability, economy For example, a word, phrase or sentence can be streamlined by removing something that seems redundant or repetitive. 2
Readability, general For example, a sentence or paragraph may need revision to make it easier to read. 1
Readability, wording For example, some text can be made more natural-sounding by changing a word or by revising a phrase. 1
Substance, sufficiency of information For example, certain important information should be added or made more visible. 3
Substance, value of information For example, certain information or material may require revision or removal because it seems unhelpful to readers and/or the website owner. 3
Visual For example, an element such as a banner or image may need to be moved, removed or resized because it obscures something else.
Proposed edits in total 21+

This review is an expression of our observations, reflections and opinions. It was made possible by our thorough examination of a website. Each of our 21+ proposed edits is supported by explanations and illustrations that will be made available to the webmaster upon request.

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Editorial Website Review of Walker Corporate Law

On July 9, 2020, we conducted an editorial review of the website of Walker Corporate Law, a New York corporate law firm. For this purpose, we selected 6 web pages, corresponding to a sample of approximately 5,600 words. Our findings and recommendations were as follows:

Quality parameter Explanation Proposed edits
Mechanics, grammar For example, a phrase, sentence or paragraph may need revision so that it becomes grammatically correct. 10+
Mechanics, punctuation For example, punctuation within a sentence or between two sentences may need to change to ensure correctness and improved readability. 6+
Mechanics, spelling For example, a word or phrase may require revision to ensure proper and consistent spelling. 13+
Navigation For example, a hyperlink may need to be updated or removed to ensure that all links work properly.
Readability, clarity For example, a sentence or paragraph may need clarification to avoid uncertainty about its meaning. 1
Readability, economy For example, a word, phrase or sentence can be streamlined by removing something that seems redundant or repetitive. 6
Readability, general For example, a sentence or paragraph may need revision to make it easier to read.
Readability, wording For example, some text can be made more natural-sounding by changing a word or by revising a phrase.
Substance, sufficiency of information For example, certain important information should be added or made more visible.
Substance, value of information For example, certain information or material may require revision or removal because it seems unhelpful to readers and/or the website owner. 1
Visual For example, an element such as a banner or image may need to be moved, removed or resized because it obscures something else.
Proposed edits in total 37+

This review is an expression of our observations, reflections and opinions. It was made possible by our thorough examination of a website. Each of our 37+ proposed edits is supported by explanations and illustrations that will be made available to the webmaster upon request.

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Editorial Website Review of Davidoff Hutcher & Citron LLP

On July 7, 2020, we conducted an editorial review of the website of Davidoff Hutcher & Citron LLP, a New York corporate law firm. For this purpose, we selected 6 web pages, corresponding to a sample of approximately 3,100 words. Our findings and recommendations were as follows:

Quality parameter Explanation Proposed edits
Mechanics, grammar For example, a phrase, sentence or paragraph may need revision so that it becomes grammatically correct. 7
Mechanics, punctuation For example, punctuation within a sentence or between two sentences may need to change to ensure correctness and improved readability. 2
Mechanics, spelling For example, a word or phrase may require revision to ensure proper and consistent spelling. 8
Navigation For example, a hyperlink may need to be updated or removed to ensure that all links work properly.
Readability, clarity For example, a sentence or paragraph may need clarification to avoid uncertainty about its meaning.
Readability, economy For example, a word, phrase or sentence can be streamlined by removing something that seems redundant or repetitive. 1
Readability, general For example, a sentence or paragraph may need revision to make it easier to read. 1
Readability, wording For example, some text can be made more natural-sounding by changing a word or by revising a phrase. 3
Substance, sufficiency of information For example, certain important information should be added or made more visible. 2
Substance, value of information For example, certain information or material may require revision or removal because it seems unhelpful to readers and/or the website owner. 3
Visual For example, an element such as a banner or image may need to be moved, removed or resized because it obscures something else.
Proposed edits in total 27

This review is an expression of our observations, reflections and opinions. It was made possible by our thorough examination of a website. Each of our 27 proposed edits is supported by explanations and illustrations that will be made available to the webmaster upon request.

 

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